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De Luna - Moonlight by ~bundle-w:iconbundle-w:





una noche con luna
una noche hecha de luna
de mar de estrellas y de cielo
tejido con olas y de arena

una noche de sirenas-
de sirenas y de encantos-
de hechizos y de cantos
de caderas enperladas
con diamantes y diademas

noche de luna en otros lares
el aire que retorna desde el éter
la neblina de las adas
los pedazos de las alas
de los ángeles que llaman-
de los ángeles que llaman  

a todo aquel que ama
nos invitan a vivir y te convidan
algo de magia hoy a cernir
en los ojos que te miran

    
en la noche de  luna
de mar de sirenas –tan leve
y de serenas nevadas
   el orbe lejano quizás
   un pendiente, destello fugaz
   extiende la mano a la tinta,
   la tinta al papel…
   
   y la musa se oye decir que tal vez
   el susurro de la brisa
   se tiñe de esmeralda


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Moonlight

A moonlit night –a night
of the sea made of stars and a night
of skies
woven with waves and with sand

A mermaid night
a night of sirens and enchantments
of casting spells and songs
a night of hips adorned
with pearls and diamonds
and jewels from the ocean’s floor

A moonlit night in other homes
the air returning from the ether
the breath of fairies´ mist
the falling feathers
from calling angels
from calling angels, that shout
loud to those that can and love,
invite us to live
summon you to sift
a little magic in glass-like gazes
those icy gazes turned to you

in the moonlit night
of mermaids´ seas –the night
of snow that falls serene
   a distant sphere perhaps
   a sequined fleeting sparkle
   extends its hand to the ink
   the ink to the white scroll


   and the muse is heard, perhaps:
     the air today is emerald
     and the air today-
     it whispers
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A more or less recent poem of mine.
I think this time the translation worked alright -as far as translations can go.
Please comment, question, critique!

Pic from SXC
[February 18, 2008]
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This is intriguing to me because last night coming home after watching 'Speed Racer', I couldn't stop looking up at the sky- the clouds were rippled like flotsam in an upside-down sea, and the moon seemed like a reflection from under the brine. Did you write this last night? Or earlier? You say 'more or less'...
The date is at the end of my comment. :) But I am glad you read it at a moment that was significant.

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"...The spirit sought not then, in cherished sadness
A cloudy subsitute for failling gladness..."
-William Wordsworth
Wow it's incredibly beautiful!
do you speak Spanish? it's good to read some beautiful poetry in Spanish :D
I found this poem deeply intriguin and beautiful, full of mystery and enchantment.
It's a great masterpiece!

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True love comes quietly, without banners or flashing lights. If you hear bells, get your ears checked.

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Thank you! I am glad you have enjoyed my poem.
I am both honored and flattered by your comment and :+fav:.
And yes, I do speak Spanish -de hecho, es mi primer idioma, pero generalmente si pongo un poema en Spanish, trato de tener algo asi como una traduccion to go with it, ya que la mayoria de las personas aqui en DevArt no dominan nuestra lengua.
Mil gracias otra vez! :)

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"...The spirit sought not then, in cherished sadness
A cloudy subsitute for failling gladness..."
-William Wordsworth
ay que bueno encontrar a alguien mas que hable español! un placer conocerte! es cierto que hay muchas personas no hablan español aqui por eso me alegra tanto haber conocido a una poeta tan talentosa que hable y escriba en español ^^

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True love comes quietly, without banners or flashing lights. If you hear bells, get your ears checked.

Avatar by *Emotikonz
:aww: Gracias!

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"...The spirit sought not then, in cherished sadness
A cloudy subsitute for failling gladness..."
-William Wordsworth
de nada ^^

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True love comes quietly, without banners or flashing lights. If you hear bells, get your ears checked.

Avatar by *Emotikonz
Que bello y magico me suena este poem, me hace sentir y pensar en tierra de hadas :giggle:


que bonito ^^

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Soy lo calido del silencio, lo grato de la soledad; soy la brisa suave que mueve lo cabellos y acaricia los rostros; soy las sencillas y fragantes flores de jazmín Soy la solitaria, delicada y siempre natural...FLOR DE LIS:rose:
Gracias! I'm glad you liked it, y que las imagenes funcionan.

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"...The spirit sought not then, in cherished sadness
A cloudy subsitute for failling gladness..."
-William Wordsworth

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